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How To Write Query Letters ... or, really, how to revise query letters so they actually work

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

#138-revised

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Dear Query Shark, Young, naïve and directionless, Molly Brennan follows her boyfriend, Jake, to the Mt. Baker ski area to work as a seasonal...
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Wednesday, October 28, 2009

#137

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Dear Query Shark, "I'm not in love with Alice Stevens, she's just a very sexy reccuring dream. At least that's what I ...
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Tuesday, October 27, 2009

#136-revised 4x-For the Win

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Dear Query Shark: I found you on AgentQuery .com. Your profile indicates that my 90,000-word novel might be your kind of book. Ok , I...
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Sunday, September 27, 2009

#135-Revised

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Dear Shark, The Victims of Violent Crimes online forum provides support for those wanting to process through tragedy—but two of its member...
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#134

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Dear Query Shark, I have an incomplete fantasy novel here's where I stop reading and send a form rejection letter that I'd like...
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Sunday, September 20, 2009

#133-Revised 8x

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Dear QueryShark: Years ago, officer Gina Russo fired a shot in an act of self-defense, which caused an d explosion, killing career crimin...
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#132-REVISION

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Revision: THE DEVIL ORDERS TAKEOUT is a romp, the tragicomic story of New York attorney Grayson Boldt. After the violent death of his wif...
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#131

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Dear Query Shark: Here is a story about aging people in the country. (pages redacted) This is an automatic form rejection. I used to...
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Friday, September 4, 2009

#129-Revised

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Revision: Dear Query Shark: Jack Talbot, ex Navy SEAL, is a successful New York Attorney, devoted husband and grandfather, as well as an...
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#128-Revised

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Dear Query Shark, Ambitious Senator Carinna knows something must be done: erratic young Caligula Caesar, the new Emperor, needs a companio...
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Monday, August 10, 2009

#127-revised 3x

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--> Dear Query Shark, In 1848, Jack Numont desires Beaver Island, Michigan to remain a paradise, but the Mormons are coming, ...
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