Query Shark

Second revision Dear Query Shark, Ariana has a PhD in medieval military history and works at a Manhattan dating agency. Her boss claim...

Revision #3   --> Dear Query Shark, Dee Dee Welles wants to remember the worst day of her life. As it is, with no memory of ...

I had a blinding moment of inspiration this week, prompted by the query letter posted at #252. Here's how it happened and what it means ...

  --> Dear Query Shark, Dr. Richard Hamilton, head of Physics at Livermore National Lab, is faced with the most difficult deci...

 This entry plucks examples from five queries, each of which needs work on the closing. (1) If the concept of the novel appeals to you,...

Fourth revision Dear Query Shark, The words were written on a sign posted just outside Aura Jefferson’s hometown of Langston, in rural O...

Dear QueryShark, The tiniest spark can send Afghanistan and Pakistan to war. Steven Frisk’s job is to make sure that doesn’t happen. Ali ...