I am seeking representation for
The book explores the taboo subject of suicide whilst exploring the intimate thoughts of a loving and vulnerable woman. We journey with her as she struggles with miscarriage, serial betrayal and post natal depression.
This is a series of events, not a plot. You have to have a plot. A diary format is incredibly difficult for a novel. I'm not sure why you chose that form, but I strongly encourage you to try something else.
I'm not sure I'd describe suicide as a taboo subject anymore. Thirty years ago, sure, but heck, it's in the news every day now.
This is my first book and I am sending this query letter to you as I know from your website that you welcome first time authors.
I look forward to hearing from you.